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Aman
Oct 25, 2005 4:45:49 GMT -5
Post by minyaliel on Oct 25, 2005 4:45:49 GMT -5
I dreamed of ships as light as birds, gliding gently along the shores. They took me to the Golden Lands, Where joy lives for evermore. I dreamed I saw an elven town below the Golden Pass Their towers gleamed in twilight as a day passed. I dreamed I saw a courtyard, two trees were standing there, two trees of gold and silver, and the Valar dancing there. [to be cont'ed]
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Aman
Oct 25, 2005 7:23:16 GMT -5
Post by minyaliel on Oct 25, 2005 7:23:16 GMT -5
I dreamed of ships as light as birds, gliding gently along the shores. They took me to the Golden Lands, Where joy lives for evermore. I dreamed I saw an elven town below the Golden Pass Their towers gleamed in twilight as a day passed. I dreamed I saw a courtyard, two trees were standing there, two trees of gold and silver, and the Valar dancing there.
Ah Nimloth! I long to see your famed light streaming 'cross the sea Tree besung by elven folk the rising and fall of our kind We across the sea still remember our songs still yearn for that blessed land across the sea
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bacon
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Aman
Oct 25, 2005 16:12:05 GMT -5
Post by bacon on Oct 25, 2005 16:12:05 GMT -5
Very nice and beautiful, Minyaliel. That was a great poem. I don't really know what else to say, but it was interesting. Quite good!
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Aman
Oct 25, 2005 16:45:42 GMT -5
Post by minyaliel on Oct 25, 2005 16:45:42 GMT -5
Well, thanks, I must admit I'm not quite satisfied, but well... I don't usually write LotR stuff
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